Scene 2 storyboards

Joined: 01 Aug 2008 Posts: 18 Location: Utah

here are the preliminary storyboards fore scene 2 for your review. note that I'm not quite done with them but I wanted to get some input on what I have so far. it's in a combined pdf file.

TheAnim8orMovie_Scene2_storyboards_0000.pdf

I'm going to add the dialog and effects on the side of each image. as well as add the shot number and camera direction. please fill free to comment and add your opinions about the staging and or composition of each shot(or raz me about my artistic ability. Wink

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:12 pm

that is really nice! Just what we need.

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:54 am

This is going to be different for me

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:27 am

Rough storyboard + rough voices = rough amazingness. seriously, check it out. The end part's missing of course, and we can always change it around, but it is so great to see an audio visual representation of what we have here!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PAaXiXslJNE

Joined: 01 Aug 2008 Posts: 18 Location: Utah

Awsome!

yeah the storyboards do need some work I should have the rest by tommorow then I will start on cleaning them up so they read better.

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This is going to be different for me

did I do it wrong? what is different? Confused

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:49 am

I think he just means that he's used to working without storyboards. Except we've meant to for a while. Our main artist left, and we were missing out on an important step. This way everyone has more input into the shots.

Joined: 01 Aug 2008 Posts: 18 Location: Utah

Cool.

I believe in input from multiple views and interests besides that's our target audience. the more we get views on the shot and flow of the scene the cleaner the end product will be.

if someone doesn't like something please say so. we may have an uneasy scene intentionally. but if it makes you feel uneasy and it's not supposed to ...then we have to figure out why.

I still dig that rough animatic!

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:07 am

yea i like it

sounds great and look like its going to be good to!

nice work guys

keep it up

Joined: 01 Aug 2008 Posts: 18 Location: Utah

well I finished the storyboards. here is version 2 pdf

TheAnim8orMovie_Scene2_storyboards_0002.pdf

the color changed due to lost blue pencil so I used a pen.

I'll work on cleanup tonight.

Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:51 am

theater375 wrote:

I think he just means that he's used to working without storyboards. Except we've meant to for a while. Our main artist left, and we were missing out on an important step. This way everyone has more input into the shots.

Correct

Voice Actor Joined: 07 Jul 2008 Posts: 8

I think there should be a few action shots between the King's "Lights, camera , action!" line, such as a few torches lighting up after the "lights" command, or moving the Sondra & cameraman's eye roll up a few panels so it sits as a reaction to "Camera!" Other than that, I like it a lot. It's busy enough to show how bustling the scene is, with plenty of good action shots counterpointing the camera POV. I wonder if there should be a few funny camera shots, such as bad focusing, or a close-up of some fair maiden's blouse.

Joined: 01 Aug 2008 Posts: 18 Location: Utah

Thanks for the input! I am still working on the clean up adding some color and may add lighting effects still but I can still add/remove or arrange frames!

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I wonder if there should be a few funny camera shots, such as bad focusing, or a close-up of some fair maiden's blouse.

HA! thats funny! LOL Laughing